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Gendou's: Japanese Version (Corrections)
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by jmaster14656
on 2005-05-24 12:28:29
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I didn't have much time to check, but I found one mistake: For the search engine, the "bu" in "zenbu" is incorrect. I don't have japanese font, so I can't show you the right one, but I can tell you it's the same one used for "club," as in "after school club." (the one currently on is "bu/fumi" as in "letter." |
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Re: Gendou's: Japanese Version (Corrections)
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thank you. any further corrections would be greatly appreciated. 
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Re: Gendou's: Japanese Version (Corrections)
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yes, thank you. keep them coming! ^_^;
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Re: Gendou's: Japanese Version (Corrections)
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by jmaster14656
on 2005-05-25 19:23:18 (edited 2005-05-25 19:24:33)
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(top of download/search page) The first phrase "mp3 no rinku" (in red) has been fixed, but the one immediately below reads "runku." On that same line, add a "wa" particle marker immediately after "tsukatte" and before "kanarazu." If not, change it to say "tsukau to kanarazu..." Either would make the conditional grammar flow smoother.* (download page: search results table) Change the symbol for "song" to the first one in "artist" (in the drop-down menu next to the search bar). The kanji phrase for "artist" roughly means "one who does songs." This is a lot harder to explain with roomaji, but I'm installing Japanese font on my computer tomorrow. *I'm not sure what level of formality you're aiming for, so I'll hold the grammar suggestions. For future reference, are you looking for textbook-type errors, or can we submit suggestions to improve grammatic flow? |
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Re: Gendou's: Japanese Version (Corrections)
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Urm, I'm not sure if it's wrong or not, but Gravitation song 'Sure sure naru kisetsuni' is spelt as 'Zure Zure naru kisetsuni'. I's only the pronounciation and I don't think this is a major problem, but just stating it that's all. ^^;;
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Re: Gendou's: Japanese Version (Corrections)
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ãšã‚Œã€€= zure ã™ã‚Œ = sure Only a small difference... =|  |