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Re: Poetry Club v2
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Anke: I'm gonna join the writer.. but if both would be possible then i'm gonna join two of them ^^ http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6200/shaeavatar01.jpg good luck with this thread ^^  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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@ Shae - Welcome! If you're a writer you're automatically a reader! So no worries!!  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-04-07 14:49:09 |
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Didn't even notice you started the new thread already until I started looking through things around here ^^; (I've been really busy lately so I haven't had the chance to go through and really read things) So I'll join as well. Nickname: Toyumi I'm more of a reader, but I write a few poems as well. The Hosting Link: Go Here And may I have the honor of posting the first poem? ^^ I have a question, but keep it between us two. If you could disappear, would you? Could you leave everyone behind and leave each of them out of their minds? Can you imagine, a life without you? Do you know what everyone will do? Your closest friends, where will they be? Will their lives be better or worse, will you see? No, because a world without your life is like cutting fog with a knife, Everything will be confused, I know you won't be amused. If you could disappear, would you? No, you won't and that's good for me too. As you probably know, I posted this in the Writer's Club first. But it is a poem so it might as well go here too.  |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-04-08 06:47:15 |
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@ Toyumi - Welcome!!! Yeah I recognize the poem, but it's a lovely one so I'm glad you posted it again!!!! |
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oooo~ I'm so joining. Name: Holkers As mention in your post to reply to Shae's question, then I shall be writer. Avatar host: http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx329/holkers/izayaavy.png Here's a few of mine which also inspired by my dad's poem. We made a little note book of our own poetry book xD It's not much.. xD The moment that's so precious is when the hour we are together So close to on another that the heart beats faster And almost touch the other and the minute so divine and fine and definition no one can define Never had the chance to post it in the writer's club xD
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-04-13 09:43:53 (edited 2010-04-13 17:54:52)
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@ Hokers - I love your poem!!! It has a nice rhythm to it! Edit: never mind, my computer was being stupid >.>'' |
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on 2010-04-13 11:50:27 |
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@ Holkers- Thank you for coming to the dark side!!! (rofl, just had to say that.) I really like your poem. Like Anke said, it has a nice beat to it, and its really cute. @ Anke- I just tried it, and the link worked fine for me. Also I made another poem, I just have to find it. I'll post it later. |
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on 2010-04-13 17:57:36 (edited 2010-04-13 17:57:44)
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@ Toyumi- I can't wait to read your new poem!!! My Fault Oh I wish I could think, that it was all your fault. It would make my heart sleep easy, just to know I never did wrong. But I know I did my part, and I know that my apology won't mean a thing, but I won't close my eyes until you hear it from me. I'm so sorry my friend for blaming you for my every inner pain, I'm sorry for complaining about every ache in my body, I am sorry for everything you think I did wrong, even if it's just a figment of your imagination. If hating me makes it easier to forget, then I guess I'll have to hate you too. But you know that's not my nature, and that's my fault. yeah... I think that one's kind of depressing, no? |
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Re: Poetry Club v2
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on 2010-04-14 13:01:54 |
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@ Anke: I like your poem alot. It is depressing, but it's very good. ^^ I spent a long time looking for the poem yesterday, and then remembered that I didn't type it. ^^; So after a little bit of a delay, here it is... Welcome to the fantasy world. Where wild dreams com true And there's fun all abound. An amusement park here, A chocolate factory there, It is surely the place to be. Welcome to the fantasy world. Having fun isn't just an option It's a way of life. Fun in the sun And you play all day, just wait for the action at dusk. Welcome to the fantasy world. When the sun goes down The monsters come out. The Boogie Man and the monster in the closet, They are all accounted for. Even Big Foot is here. Welcome to the fantasy world. Where the monsters play at night, Some eat people Some eat dreams The monsters are very awful and mean. Welcome to the fantasy world. As the sun comes up the monsters flee The people wake up. They notice some are missing, But they don't care. For they go and have fun all day. Welcome to the fantasy world. So what do you think? Kind of long, I know. I wrote this one recently (unlike Disappear), so if there's a difference in style than that's probably the reason. |
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on 2010-04-15 16:14:25 (edited 2010-04-15 17:47:24)
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@ Toyumi - I like it! It has great imagery! I almost feel like I'm in wonderland! The Tale of a Hardworking Student When you read this don't be down, and try to erase that disappointed frown. You've done your best, so let them do the rest. Because everyone had their foils, and you're just happens to be Pre-Calc. I know what you are going to say; that this subject has ruined your day. Just remember that in the end, you still have a very good head. And years later these trivial grades will not mean anything. So what if you're a big fish in a small pond, you're making mistake as if you were a blond. Don't worry about them calling you dumb, because at them, you may bite your thumb. The future is a mystery that you are holding in the palm of your hand. This one had a lighter tone to it ^.^ I wrote it in Pre-calc today when I received a very unwanted grade on a test. Oh and just a side note, I don't have anything against blonds, it just rhymes with pond and gets my point across. So I apologize to all the fair haired people out there :3 |
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on 2010-04-15 16:38:58 |
Oh my, a Poetry club. Mind if I join in? 
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on 2010-04-15 17:46:11 |
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@ Carrot - sure thing you may join, please read the first post!!! |
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Anke: Thank you very much :DD That was really sad poem. Even I can feel the pain. Lol. Been there done that xD Toyumi: You know, it's like a mixture of the animation land. Chocolate factory, Wonderland, Neverland, and so on. Geez I wish I am an animated character kid! Anke Poem #2: Wow, I like it. That would be a great advice. If only some would open their eyes and realize xD Carrot: You're welcome here :D Okay this poem is really old of mine. My beginner poem which I point it out x: If you are a bird, Will you fly up in the sky? And warned the people down below, That a danger is coming from the sky? If you are a tree, Will you grow taller and bigger? And protecting the people that are short and smaller, That a bomb is aiming at their children? If you are a building, Will you stay strong? And braving to save the people, That a giant ant is killing all the innocent? If I were them, I will do the same. Will you? A little edit in that poem. Enjoy :D
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on 2010-04-16 00:55:53 |
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Joining :3 Nickname: Chie Reader :3 http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg13/icy_rain1314/lightningavy.jpg Yoroshkun ne? :3 |
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on 2010-04-16 02:58:44 |
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@Anke Hi there, I haven't had a chance to check out the Writers Club yet, if I have the free time, I would really like to read all the stories written in the Writers Club. As for now would I be able to join in the Poetry Club although I’m not a member or the Writers Club. Anyway, I am also new at this section. Hopefully it won't be a problem. Nickname: Jo I’m actually more into reading; however I will also write something if I’m free. XD Avatar’s link: http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p132/liweny/JoAvy-1.png Here I had something to start off to describe my true self. Tomorrow I Will ChangeTomorrow I will change turn a new leaf and start anew I will exercise before breakfast Not eat cookies between meals Not fret over trivialities Not to regret after studying last minute Not run about being upset over something small and so Tomorrow I will change I say this every day Nothing gets into mind This is a piece of my introduction. Hope its okay. 
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on 2010-04-16 12:03:41 |
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@ All: Wow I guess we're getting a lot of people here! Let's share our interest in poetry! (Am I like the welcoming committee or what? rofl... Although it is a good job to have...) @ Chie: Welcome! @ Jo: Welcome! And I like your poem, the starting over sort of thing can really apply to alot of people. It's the kind of poem that someone can connect with. @ Carrot: Welcome, but like what Anke said please put your joining post in the correct format! (see first post) @ Anke: Thank you! And I love your poem too! And I can relate. The same thing happens to me in Geometry all the time... @ Holkers: Yeah, that's the kind of feel I was going for (Like there can never be a utopia sort of place because something has to be wrong in order to achieve perfectness. That's where the monsters come in.) And I like your poem too. It's like there's sadness, and hope in all of the sadness. |
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Oh I see.. XD Nick: Carrot I have the same questions as Shae's guess I'll be a writer then! Link: This
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on 2010-04-16 17:54:59 |
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@ Holkers - Wow that poem is sooo neat! I love how it conveys a message and is kind of abstract in a way! @ Chie - Welcome!!! Feel free to use the reader's avatar and enjoy! Oh and please comment on any poetry you want, most writers love comments and constructive criticism! @Jo - Welcome!!! I love your poem man I can see myself in that one so I totally relate! Every day it's like "ok I'll start dieting now!" but then its always a three day thing and then I just HAVE to have that cookie XD! @ Toyumi - Isn't it exciting to have so many members now!!! yey!!! We have an official welcoming committee!!!! @ Carrot - Thanks!!! Welcome to the Poetry club! |
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on 2010-04-19 03:41:34 |
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Thanks for all the complement. I will try to post a better poem the next time. I haven't had a chance to read the all this beautifully written poem the other day. So I will do it today. What a serene moment. @Toyumi Both your poems are certainly wonderful. It’s like putting me in that imaginary fantasy world itself. Whereas the other poem disappear shows a different type of emotions and feeling deep down. @Anke Your poems are awesome too. I really need the poem like the tale of a hardworking student. It relates to me a lot, since I’m in my exam years and failing is part of life now. X.x @Holkers I will, if I’m able to do just as the nature calls me too. It surely is a nice poem with a good tone in it. This is my next poem. Sadly, it’s sounded so lonely, a bit of hatred and depressing too. O.o What Am I?Somewhere in between always giving to others And always keeping it all to myself I stand Somehow in between only caring for others And only caring for myself I live Somehow only for others I ask Who will be there for me? When I am only for myself Then what am I? I’m not able to online all the time, maybe a poem a week or two. Hopefully it’s fine. This club kinda slow >.< Hope to see more beautifully created poem here. Have a nice week everyone.
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