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Read my story!!!
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by CCSnumber1FAN
on 2005-09-26 16:34:10
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| I have been working on a stroy for the past few months called Kranoa's Sword and I have it posted on my web site for every one to read. The URL is http://www.angelfire.com/music/lyricsrus/KranoasSword.html. Hope ya'll like it. Post opinions here or in my guest book. This is an original story not a fanfic. |
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Re: Read my story!!!
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by CCSnumber1FAN
on 2005-09-29 20:36:13 (edited 2005-09-29 21:02:21)
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To Lucian: I will fix the "soldier" Problem in the Prologue. There is onr thing I have to tell you. Are you blind. DID you not see the part that said and I quote "© 2005 Iron Claw Entertainment/Erik Terrebonne All Rights Reserved No duplication of any portion of this story is allowed." Also I don't need you to tell me how to write MY story, ya jackass. So if you have anything else to say, don't say it at all. This is just a friendly reminder. Oh and by the way I can't help it if I sometimes misspell words I am cajun for crying out loud. Plus do all samurai's have some sort of sixth sense about their surroundings. "And that as they say is that"- Dr. Maximillian Roivas, Eternal Darkness Sanity's Requiem. P.S. Oh and by the way, Necros is a place Numb nuts. Sheesh, what a moron. Opps, did I type that just now, please forget about that......NOT!!!!! |
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| Ok first off you need to calm down. You are acting like a little kid. He was very nice and polite when he made his comments. Also, if you do not want his opinion, don't say, "Post opinions here or in my guest book." That was his opinion, don't get mad because it wasn't the one you wanted. Also, I do agree with him. You're characters seem bland and have no personality whatsoever. It is like watching a one-man play. Sorry, it just needs work, and needs to be written as a story. You keep calling it a story, but yet it does not read out like one. |
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by CCSnumber1FAN
on 2005-10-03 09:01:06 (edited 2005-10-06 05:33:42)
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To Dudeman You have no idea about the crap I went through to come up with this story and to have some nobody rewrite MY work is unforgiveable, so mind your own . What if you were in my position. What if you had some one messing with your shit, what then? Also did you read Chapters 2 and 3 yet? If you did not read them, then go ahead and read them. If you are on his side then fuck you, if you are on my side that is all good. Just stay out of this ok. I am not being mean or anything it is just that I feel like all that I have done is being taken away from me and I don't need anyone to hold my hand 'kay. If he wants to be an asshole, let him be and I hope Lucian is reading this too. |
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on 2005-10-03 09:57:52 |
Lucian has been banned. anyone else? 
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